Possible Cover for" Words of No Redemption." Tell me what you guys think about

                  As of right now i'm debating weather or not to use the back cover design,
                  the front cover is definitely a keeper. I so love the red and black.
                  Though the drawing/ painting is of my own art work, i'm still not sure of which
                  one to use for it, but I may just customize it to where, you could have like two
                  or maybe three options to choose from when you order it.

The father will lift when it becomes to dark. Title: Revived

I was walking when I seen a man down
I was the first person site
So there was no one else around
Then I realized that it was me lying on the ground
I could feel my spirit lifting from my body
Slowly as my eyes started to roll in the back of me
My spirit was streaming but no one could hear it
My body was turning cold on the pavement
Searching for strength
Trying to regain consciousnesses
And escape this death clinch
My soul and spirit became the medic
As I had began to rise again
The pupils started to return to my eyes again
And I was no longer turning pale
I got a glance at hell
©Adrian Ware

Real love takes two to succeed

one of my really old poems: Title: Changes

Love is like america and america is like science

And the reason I compare all three of those together

Is because all of them are the same in one way

For example science is never wrong 

Because they always change the facts 

Love is basically the same

It's just a little different from that

Except for love doesn't change the facts 

Instead it just changes the person 

And America changes the rules and laws that we live by 

Changes only complicate things 

But you can change almost anything 

Except for love 

Because if you change the meaning of love

Than you would have changed everything 

Because love is so confusing that 

People often misuse it 

It's so complicated that most people hate it 

Some people are even afraid of it 

Scientist can't even figure out 

Why it's so twisted it 

That's why they don't study

®Adrian Ware

Defeated

Trying to push pass all the obstacles that stands in the way 
But most of us fall prey to the name that is defeat
For even though we reach anticipating the relief of stress
The elusiveness of our problems 
Makes it hard to solve them
So I ask
What can you do when fatigue hits you 
With defeat is in your view 
You can either fall down and not get back up
Or you can wait for the right moment to build up
®Adrian Ware

Make your first kiss last forever

Minefield

Going in circles looking so confused

Not knowing which route should be used 

For stepping in the wrong direction can activate the charge 

Therefore creating a shortage in the fuse 

The field is covered with mines

This all done by design 

Explosions can take place everyday 

Which is a indication that 

You are living your life the wrong way

Grenades are thrown from above 

Landing near the things that you assume that you love 

But every pathway has it's own quicksand 

You just have to chose 

The one that leaves you slowly sinking 

®Adrian Ware